I definately feel that sound plays a huge part in upping the creepy factor and you really nailed that. The animation was a little subpar, but I'm more than willing to forgive that.
However, I think the cynic in me would have liked the story to be expanded to have some kind of explanation of whats going on. Then again, presented this way keeps the urban legend feel that makes you think it could happen to anyone.
Anyway, great work, keep it up.
I would have liked to expand the story but I don't have much time right now with midterms. I'm glide you liked it though despite that. Thank you so much for the score.
I liked the message and it carried a heavy vibe with it, but a couple things through it off. First, I think the narration using "I" and such would be better placed in the beginning, then the Lethal Injection scene can take place, then the narration of "afterlife", ending again at the cemetery. At least, thats how I would have done it.
Good work anyway.
I can definitely feel how people criticize ideas and the cycle of getting something out there. Nice work, only issue is some sounds were louder over the narration and got a little muddled.
Cool, but could use more
Pretty cool overall, I had fun with it. But it would seem that there is room to add more. For example, if the different colors of blocks you bounce off of had different attributes (ie. one is springy and sends you highers, one makes you bounce really low, one instantly changes the direction of gravity) or make combos out of them (ie hit three red ones and get a score bonus).
I did enjoy the game, just thought I would throw some suggestions in there.
Awesome Flash Shooter
This was great as far as mechanics go. Sometimes I did feel I got robbed on a Clean Shot, but it happens. Great Eerie feeling through it, with signing yourself to this challenge and undead appearing out of the mist.
I think the one thing I would have liked is a story above "You are challenging yourself", but great nontheless.
Mass carnage reminiscent of ages past. Great job with this one, keep up the good work.
One of my favorite songs from the game, I use to sit in the windmill just to listen to it.
Anyway, great job with the song, I loved the opening how it didn't start off with the familiar theme but sort of just fell into it. However, the piano piece was short and just fell off and the organ started which seemed just a bit off to me.
I did warm up to the organ part, the only other thing was sort of the heavy hit to overwhelm the organ took me by surprise.
In any case, very well done. I wouldn't mind seeing some other songs done up in this style.
I liked most of it, but definately your strongest piece was from 1:07 to 1:35 with the Trance bit. Hope to hear something more like that from you, keep up the good work.
Thanks for the review!
Check out Thru the Sea of Trance
I think you'd like that
I can understand the mega man comment, it would seem a bit suiting. I would love to make flash works to all your music, the kind that tell a story with a mood from the music.
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