Kryptonite803's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burger Catch]

Good, but dull

It was pretty good, but there could be more to add. To follow old game forumlas, you could add some kind of power up. Say perhaps you widen the playing field, have a sprint command to get back and forth faster, and maybe have a power up to run faster or have unlimited sprint. You could have a power up to get something like a wheel barrow which allows you to cover a wider space.

Just think of some creative stuff and if it gets too hard thinking about it, play some other games for inspiration. Hope this helped.

7IsUnlucky responds:

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[Samurai Defense]

Always progress to be made

I liked it, it was very well done. However, it felt glitchy at times. First, maybe give a little more time to get started before the first wave. And then set it so only foot soldiers or weak troops come through first. Having to deal with 3 or 4 cavalry in the beginning isn't very easy.

After so much attacking, your castle starts on fire. From there, it burns down. That is pretty cool. However, it frustrating not having a way to restore it. All they have to do is hit it a couple times and it starts on fire.

Good game, just some things I noticed. Keep up the good work.

zupagames responds:

I'm glad you liked it :D

If you want to restore the castle or the towers send a villager. He will extinguish the fire and the castle/tower will be restored.

Its better to have upgraded troops, specially upgrading the weapons as that will make all your troops stronger with just one upgrade. Also, placing the archers on top of towers will give them an advantage as they are only hit by other archers or if someone sets the tower on fire.

Thanks for the advices.

[New Preloader Tutorial]

Ok I guess

There didn't seem to be too much explaining in there. To be fair, I only skimmed through it cuz there are so many tutorials on here. But I think it would benefit if you took a few screens to explain in detail whats goin on and how it works. That way, you can set a foundation for people to get creative.

Nice loader at the end though with the circle.

42ndEndOfTheWorld responds:

To be fair, there are lot's of explaining in tutorial, so I think that you should just rewatch it.
But thank you for your opinion.

[Maze Completer]

Could use improvement

Its pretty cool, but I had a couple issues. Like startin the game gave me an ear splitting sound, then the moving sound was rather annoying. Some BG music would be nice.

Also, I had a big issue tryin to movie over a single space and it would jump two. I just tap the arrow and it jumps like that. Not sure if theres much you can do, but thought I'd let you know.

Nice job overall.

omarshaaban responds:

well i tried it press a light click and it will move one square

[Learn to draw backgrounds]

Somewhat ok

There are a few points you seem to have missed. One already being said is perspective. The most informative one was the outside walls, where you stated what tools were used and stuff. If you could make this again, try more interesting backgrounds. You only need one basic one, then make comments about how you can make doors and windows and all that.

autowepon responds:

i can realise they are pretty much the same but if people wanted to see that then thats there choice