I definately feel that sound plays a huge part in upping the creepy factor and you really nailed that. The animation was a little subpar, but I'm more than willing to forgive that.
However, I think the cynic in me would have liked the story to be expanded to have some kind of explanation of whats going on. Then again, presented this way keeps the urban legend feel that makes you think it could happen to anyone.
Anyway, great work, keep it up.
I would have liked to expand the story but I don't have much time right now with midterms. I'm glide you liked it though despite that. Thank you so much for the score.
I liked the message and it carried a heavy vibe with it, but a couple things through it off. First, I think the narration using "I" and such would be better placed in the beginning, then the Lethal Injection scene can take place, then the narration of "afterlife", ending again at the cemetery. At least, thats how I would have done it.
Good work anyway.
I can definitely feel how people criticize ideas and the cycle of getting something out there. Nice work, only issue is some sounds were louder over the narration and got a little muddled.
Awesome fast-paced comedy. I loved the strategy guide bit, and the "Oh god" was a perfect ending. My only complaint would be for a more wrapped up ending (like credits), instead of cutting a little short and back to the loading screen.
Great work, can't wait to see more.
Looking for a sequel
Awesome work. The idea of upstaging the guy who screwed you over works pretty well, so it kept a story going for me. Maybe next time you can use something like two different bands of different genres and the guitarists go at it with each other. Just an idea.
Smooth animations, especially during fight scenes. Good voice work, even if it got a little too much here and there. I was really impressed with taking this out of strictly 2D and moving the camera around. All in all, solid work on an awesome flash. My only issues came in some conveniences for plot advance, like all the chaos emeralds being in the same place or the legendary stars telling them to show up at that time. But still awesome, keep up the good work.
Well, first of all, I am interested in seeing where this goes. The animation is pretty interesting, but otherwise gives no indication what this will be about. Still, based off of what I saw, I am looking forward to seeing what you do.
That said, I'm still not a fan of keeping demos around in the archives. Looking forward to your work, so keep it up.
Not only was it a good style and fresh on NG, but it was something you could get some pretty good philosophies to pull from it. I would definitely like to see more like this on NG. Keep up the great work and hope to see more from you.
My only complaint is some of the animations were just a little short, so I couldn't see what they were. Dunno if this is what you were trying for or not. Still, great job.
Definately a lot better than the first one, which was simply too slow. Still got in the slapstick which was cool. Still not favoring keeping it in the portal, but make an actual episode with that in there and continue the style and you'll have a good thing going.
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